Hardik Dewra
3 min read
How to build a subscribe and save offer page
Most subscribe and save pages leak because nobody answers the cancelling question near the button. Fix the default, the pricing and four objections.
Set the toggle to subscription by default, show the saving as a per unit number the buyer can say out loud, and put the cancelling terms right under the button. Most subscribe and save pages leak because the flexibility question never gets answered anywhere near the ask.
Default your subscribe and save toggle to subscription
Use two radio options. Subscription selected when the page loads, one time purchase sitting underneath it. That single change turns the question from should I commit into do I want to give up the discount. Amazon trained the whole market on the phrase Subscribe and Save, so use wording close to it rather than inventing a name for your programme.
Skip the checkbox. A pre ticked box that adds a recurring charge reads as a dark pattern and earns chargebacks. Two clearly priced radio buttons with subscription preselected is the honest version of the same lift.
Show three numbers instead of one percentage
Save 20 percent is a number the buyer has to do maths on. Show the struck through one time price, the subscription price, and the cost per day or per serving. 34 dollars a month, 1.13 a day, 8.50 saved every order. Three concrete numbers beat one percentage, because a buyer can repeat them to their partner.
Carry the same numbers into the sticky mobile bar. A bar that only says Add to cart, while the price sits 600 pixels up the page, asks somebody to scroll back and remember what they are agreeing to.
Answer the four subscription worries next to the button
They are always the same four. Am I locked in. Will I forget it is coming. What if I end up with six unopened tubs. How hard is cancelling, really. Answer each one in a single line of 12 to 18 words, directly under the buy button, rather than in an FAQ at the bottom of the page.
Write the real terms rather than the marketing version. Cancel in two taps from your account, no email or phone call is a claim you can be held to, and it converts. Cancel anytime attached to a flow that needs a support ticket is the fastest route to a wave of one star reviews.
Sell the delivery timing instead of the discount
A discount is a price argument, and price arguments attract churners. What you are really selling is never running out. Say it in plain words. We ship on day 25 so it lands before your last capsule. Let people pick 30, 45 or 60 day delivery on the page, with 30 preselected for a one month supply.
Add one line about skipping. Going away? Skip a delivery from the email we send four days before it ships. That sentence kills the six unopened tubs fear better than any extra percentage off.
Fix the gap between the page and checkout
Baymard Institute's meta analysis of cart abandonment studies puts the average at around 70 percent, and it has stayed between 69 and 71 percent since 2014. A lot of that leak happens after your page has done its job, so carry the offer through. Frequency, saving and cancelling terms should all still be visible in the cart and at checkout.
Test the whole flow on your own phone once a month with a real card. Watch whether the subscription choice survives the cart drawer, whether the discount still shows at checkout, and how many taps cancelling takes from the confirmation email.
Watch the second order more than the first
A page that pushes first order conversion up while second order churn rises with it has made you poorer. Track subscribers who reach their second shipment as a percentage of first orders, and revenue per visitor at 90 days. Both sit in your subscription app and your Shopify reports.
Compare that group against one time buyers from the same ad spend. Second order retention under half means the page is overselling something the product does not deliver by week four. The fix lives in the copy above the button rather than in a bigger discount.
The build checklist
Subscription radio selected by default. Three numbers shown, including the cost per day. Frequency picker with 30 days preselected. Four objection lines under the button. Skip and cancel terms in plain words, with the real number of taps. Sticky mobile bar carrying the price. Terms repeated in the cart.
Ship all of it, then change one thing at a time. Start with the four objection lines under the button. It is the cheapest edit on the list and usually the one nobody has made.
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